I have attached a proofread version. There was not much to correct.
I think the only notable word correction was this one:
Auf der anderen Seite, wenn wir Schönes sehen, angenehme Geräusche hören, angenehme Gerüche riechen, Leckeres schmecken, eine sanfte Berührung spüren oder eine angenehme Temperatur wahrnehmen – nicht zu warm und nicht zu kalt – oder schöne Gedanken haben, empfinden wir Freude und Befriedigung mit diesen Ausblicken Anblicken, Tönen, Gerüchen, Geschmäckern, Berührungen und Gedanken.
Otherwise there were mainly some few commas to add here and there.
How do you feel about this article. What do you think about this translation.
I think it is a good practical manual.
The translation is very good.
Thank you always for your good advice already received several times.
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Thank you so much Moritz, thank you so much for the help and advice.
Based on the opinion you gave me, It really helped me.
I want you to know that I really appreciate your reply and help.
I will discuss your opinion with my friends,
as you likely know this is a very important thing to me and for this Dhamma Article.
Thank you so much!!
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